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DEVELOPMENT OF PAGE 15
Rob Hughes: Script ~ Michael Kaluta: Layout ~ Thomas Yeates: Pencils and Inks
Colors by Thomas Yeates and Lori Almeida ~ Letters by Steve Dutro
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Kaluta Layout and Notes
Yeates Pencil Sketch
Michael Kaluta's Notes for Page 15
Pnl 1: inset: the tower Window
Pnl 2: De Vac's Face
Pnl 3: Simon and Richard wrestle...
the shadow of the tower falls across them
Pnl 4: looking up past them at that dang tower in the background: 
could even have the 2001 eclipse-look to the sun
Pnl 5: side shot, balloon from off		 .
ROB HUGHES ADAPTATION AND SCRIPT
PAGE 15
INT. WESTMINSTER TOWER WINDOW/ PALACE GARDENS — DAY
Panels 1-5
High above in one of the windows of the armory tower overlooking the gardens, a hooded and dark robed De Vac watches from the shadows as young Richard and Simon play.

Panel 1
SFX: (across panels) He he he he

Panel 2
FATHER SUPERIOR (V.O.)
The gleeful laughter ascends innocently.
SFX: He he he he he he he

Panel 4
SFX: He he he he he he
FATHER SUPERIOR (V.O.): Bouncing delicately upon a gentle zephyr.

Panel 6
Close-up De Vac. His old brow drawn together in a malignant scowl, a terrible plan forming in his shrewd mind.
FATHER SUPERIOR (V.O.): To astir a malignant mind.
(2nd balloon): And a vivid masterpiece of pure hellishness is conceived.

Panel 7 Large
Simon holding up a giggling Richard.
YOUNG PRINCE RICHARD (SFX): AAAWWWEEEE

Panel 8
Simon and young Richard who are looking up off panel toward a stern voice.
WOMAN’S VOICE (O.S.): There you are!
SIMON: Uh, oh. We be in deep trouble now with...
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Yeates B/W
Yeates Colour
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